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The first day they met part 3

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"Umm... M-my name i-is Mog-gin… could you h-help me get untangled?" Mogin finally sputtered. She was deathly afraid of this odd looking figure above her, but she very well couldn't just ignore him since she was tangled. Though, he didn't seem to take notice to her plea for help. Worry steadily growing inside of her, she noticed he seemed to be staring down at her feet. She looked down and tried lifting them to see them better. They lifted a little, but quickly stopped as a part of the ribbon became taunt. From what she could see, there was nothing wrong with them at all. She wiggled her toes a little and tried again.

"H-hello? My name is…" she stopped herself as suddenly the figure slowly knelt down at her feet and started reaching out a hand for them. That's when she noticed the man was only a boy of her age, and relaxed some. In relief she stretched some, wiggling her toes a little more with trying to get comfortable. Though for some reason he didn't start untangling her, but just started touching her feet gently.

Ace had no idea what fascinated him so much about her feet, but, something seemed to call to him. He gently started stroking them. He got a reaction both from her and from himself. She pulled back some suddenly, and a wave of happiness fell over him. He knew she was talking to him, but for some reason he didn't seem to want to understand her. He knew they both spoke the same language, but his mind was racing and his body seemed to be acting on its own. At first he was only stroking her feet, but he soon found himself laying down near them, then moving his head slowly closer toward them.

By now, Mogin was starting to become afraid again. "Hey! W-what are you doing? Why won't you talk to me? Why won't you-" She cut herself off as she stifled a laugh. She had no idea what happened, but he did something to her foot that tickled. A few moments later the feeling came again, this time though she took note of how it felt. It started at the heels of her feet, and worked its way up her sole, over her arches, and stopped just before her toes. Again she stifled another laugh as it happened, and it finally clicked as to what he was doing.

"Hey! Are you licking my feet!? W-why would you do-" She started angrily, but then was cut off by another laugh coming on. Once it passed, she continued talking. "You do something like that? That's just…. Just…" She was looking for a word, but instead all that came was giggles. The licking was starting to get to her, and it was making her laugh some. When she giggled though, he seemed to start licking more often. She continued giggling no matter how much she tried to stop it, and the more she giggled, the more he licked.

"H-hahey! Stohohp that! It's-s-s-s tickling mehe!" she tried to pull her feet away, but it was to no avail; what little she could get away, he simply moved forward that small amount and continued licking. Eventually she noticed that it seemed that if she kept giggling and pulling her feet away, the more he seemed to be determined to lick her soles. She then bit her tongue and starting curling and uncurling her toes to try and lessen the tickling sensations that were coming from her feet. Wrong move it seemed.

Ace had no idea why he was licking her feet, or why he wouldn't stop no matter how much she asked him to. Nor did he know the reason why the more she giggled and wiggled, the more he wanted to lick at her feet. When she stopped giggling all at once, he did seem to slow down a little with licking. Right once he saw her toes curling though, he immediately scooted up, and put as many of her toes in his mouth as he could. For some reason he had to do this, something compelled him to do so. Right once his mouth closed down around her toes, he began to nibble on them gently, as well as suck on them. Normally he would of jumped at what happened next, but something kept him where he was.

She suddenly couldn't hold it anymore, and burst out laughing. The nibbling was just too much, it tickled more than anything she'd ever felt before. She shook all over and kept laughing uncontrollably. She kept trying to plea to the Inumimi at her feet, but she couldn't get much of anything but laughter to come out of her mouth. After a minute or so though, she started to notice that she really didn't mind the situation she was in.

She was bound to the point where she couldn't move. She had someone at her feet, tickling her away, and there was nothing she could do about it. She had seen things like this happen to her friends, but they all hated it, especially when their feet were involved. For some reason though, she actually liked it. She laughed more, not only at the tickling sensations that kept coming from her feet, but also at the fact that there was nothing she could do, nothing at all, that could make this situation any better for her.

An hour must have passed before Ace finally stopped. He had no idea what came over him, or why he kept doing what he was doing. He looked up at the girl whose toes and feet he was just nibbling on, and blushed deeply. He never actually noticed how beautiful she was, or what she was tangled in. He looked down at her feet and blushed even more. They were even more adorable then anything he'd ever seen before and he had no idea why. The girl though, seemed to be breathing quickly and deeply now, and that's when it struck him.

"Oh… Oh my! I'm so so so sorry miss!" He quickly got to his feet and looked around for what was holding her down. He quickly found it and went to work untangling her. To his surprise though, instead of being mad or furious with him, she only giggled more and then laughed.

"It's quite alright there pup. I actually…. Well…" Now she looked down and started blushing a good deal too. "I actually enjoyed that very very much. The only thing I really am wondering about is who you are, and why you did that." She laughed a little more and continued blushing, watching him working to untangle her.

He was taken aback for a moment. He never told her his name! Here, he was raised to be polite, proper, and helpful, did the one thing that was very very impolite!

"I'm so sorry again miss. My name is Ace." He did a little bow to her, and continued working. When he got her ankles untangled and looked at her feet again, he seemed to think. "… as to why I did that… I… I really don't quite know what came over me... I hope you're alright though. Are you hurt any?" He seemed worried again, and quickly kept untangling her. Once again though, like before, she only laughed and smiled at him before she replied.

"Well hello then Ace. My name is Mogin, and no, I'm not hurt at all." She laughed again and continued as he finished untangling her legs and torso, and was working now on her arms and wrists. "I'm just glad you were here to get me out of this mess. I don't think anyone normally walks this path, and I could have been stuck out here for a really really long time!" She laughed again and pulled her arms back once they were free.

She rubbed herself some, straightening out her shirt and picking twigs off of herself, cleaning herself up a little. Ace, though, started bundling up the ribbon and started babbling about how sorry he was for what happened, and never seemed to think for a moment about the part where she thanked him for saving her. She only grinned, slipped back on her flip-flops that had fallen over very close by, and then walked back over to him. Once at him, he slowly came to a stop with the babbling and looked back into her eyes as she looked into his. A moment passed again in silence with them just staring at each other before she giggled and tackled him to the ground.

Taken by surprise, Ace simply let out a cry and fell to the ground behind him, with her right on top of him. She was hugging him tightly and rubbing her head against his chest. He blushed once again, and slowly brought his arms up to hug her back. Once he did, she giggled and looked up at him.
"Thanks for rescuing me Ace~" And with that, she leaned up and kissed him on the lips, giggling madly and going back to rubbing her head gently against his chest.

He was stunned… no one had ever kissed him before like that, and no one ever seemed happy with what he did. Yet this girl, Mogin, seemed to be very thankful for saving her from a situation that he created in the first place. Before he could thank her back, she jumped up and held out a hand for him.
"Now come now. I need to bring you home to show my parent's what I found out in the woods today." She winked at him and grinned. He didn't believe her at first, but she really seemed serious about bringing him home to her place.

"But, I can't do that! I… I…" He went through his mind looking for an excuse, but was suddenly tackled over again by Mogin.

"You're coming with me whether you like to or not. I went out here to catch something to show my parents, and now I want to show them that I caught myself a boyfriend~" She grinned and took the red ribbon he had carefully wrapped up. He was shocked at her comment, but before he could protest or fight back he found his arms bound behind his back, a wad of ribbon in his mouth, and something like a collar leading off from his neck to the rest of the ribbon in a matter of moments. She had used the very ribbon that held her to now hold him!

He didn't believe it at first, and tried to move his arms, but it was real. In just a few seconds she had tied him up, and still intended to bring him home with her. He noticed that the ball of ribbon was close by and so he moved forward to get a hold of it. Unfortunately though, Mogin beat him to it and placed a foot on it triumphantly. He tried again to get himself free, but it was really useless. She seemed to be very good with knots and was very quick about it too. He sighed and shook his head some at how dumb he was to be 'stunned' by something like that comment. Her boyfriend…

He thought about it more, and blushed deeply. If she really meant that, then he'd be able to be at those feet of hers again! Joy swept over him, and he smiled happily. Standing up with some difficulty, he looked at her happily. She simply grinned and turned, still watching him of course.

"Come now, Ace my boyfriend," She said while holding back giggles, "It's time to bring you to your new home~" And with that, she started to walk down the path. The ribbon pulled at his neck and he quickly followed. It didn't seem that this could end that badly. In fact, things would probably turn out great! This could be the best choice that was ever made for him. It couldn't be that bad of a thing being Mogins boyfriend…. Could it?
So! This is the third and final part of the short story I wrote recently, based off of this commission that I made with the amazing Kat.

It's just a little something about how I'd think My girlfriend's character, Mogin, and my character, Ace, would act when they first met, and first discovered a few things they didn't know about themselves. So now we know how they got together, how they found out what they love to do for play from then on, and a little about their personalities.

I really enjoyed writing this, and I hope I'm able to write more from later on in their lives!

Hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it!~

Part one ---> [link]
Part two ---> [link]

Character reffs and Mogin belong to :iconsilvernstrings:
Ace belongs to myself,
inspiration belongs to :iconkuriosit-kat:
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X'3 So the full, adorable story is out~ <33